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Award Winning Songwriter, Record
Producer and Music Educator Rick Brown
Please Note:
Many of the
lyrics I receive are very difficult to compose music to,
primarily for the reasons stated below. Please take the time to read
this as it will help me immensely in writing a GREAT melody to your lyrics.
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A Word About Continuity
an important note
from Rick Brown
One problem I have found with lyricists who
are not musicians is that they quite often do not have continuity in their
lyrics.
By this I mean the number of words
and/or
syllables in the lines of their verses do not match up. I cannot count the
number of times I have received lyrics from someone and after I have written
a great melody line for the first verse and chorus have discovered that
their second and/or third verses do not match up at all in
continuity. Sometimes they have even written a whole extra line in another
verse, or sometimes the lines just don't match up in syllables or number of
words in the line.
My point is > make sure you have the
same continuity and flow in the lines of your verses. Choruses are not
usually a problem as there is usually only one chorus in a song or the same
chorus repeated one or more times.
One lyricist friend I sometimes work with has
told me that sometimes he will think of a well-known melody of some hit
song. He then plays this melody in his head and writes original lyrics
around it. He is not stealing the melody, as the composer who puts the
music to his lyrics doesn't even know what he was thinking of and always
comes up with something entirely different.
Another way for lyricists to have continuity
in their lines is after you have written one verse just sit down and count
the number of words and syllables in that verse and try to match your other
verses with the same flow.
An example of continuity:
1st line, 1st Verse:
It's bare-ly been
an hour since she’s been gone
(9) Words, (10) syllables
1st line, 2nd Verse: I nev-er knew she
had a change in mind
(9) Words, (10) syllables
( 1st line of 2nd verse is
The Same
(in contiunity and flow) as the 1st line in 1st verse)
An example of
NO
continuity:
1st line, 1st Verse: It's bare'-ly been
an hour since you've been gone
(9) Words, (10) syllables
1st line,2nd verse:
I nev-er real-ly thought she would ev-er think of leav-in’
me
(11) Words, (15) syllables
( 1st line of 2nd verse is
Different
(in contiunity and flow) than 1st line in 1st verse)
examples from >
I Just Might Be Missing Her
(words and music by Richard Brown) © 1999 Richard Brown
There is of course always room for a slight
margin of difference in lines and syllables BUT the point is to try and keep
the rhythmic flow as smooth as possible.
This "Continuity Matter" may not seem like a
big deal to you (The Lyricist) but if you are a composer attempting
to write a melody line to lyrics that lack continuity it can become a
nightmare. I will reject most lyrics that I receive that do not have at
least an attempt at continuity and rhythmic flow.
ALSO >
When submitting your lyrics please "Clearly
Mark" your Verse's, Chorus's and Bridge's.
I have received many lyrics that are just one big long paragraph of words
with no reference to what is intended as a verse or chorus etc.
Usually these lyrics also lack the continuity I have been speaking of.
Once again, I will reject lyrics that do not have at least SOME Semblance of
Structure
These are some of the most popular song
structures in commercial music:
AABA -------
(verse, verse, chorus, verse)
ABAB -------
(verse, chorus, verse, chorus)
ABAC -------
(verse, chorus, verse, bridge)
ABABCB ---
(verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus)
BABABB ---
(chorus, verse, chorus, verse, chorus, chorus)
You will notice that in these 5 examples
there are only 2 that include a "Bridge". I am
NOT a fan
of "Bridges" in popular songwriting. Most hit songs consist of Verse's and
Chorus's only. In my opinion a Bridge just adds another
(un-needed)
section that takes away from the flow. But of course (like in all things)
there are always exceptions. I do realize that some songs seem to cry out
for a Bridge, but they are the exception, not the rule. Bottom
Line > Use your own judgment.
I have used these popular "Song Structures"
as an guideline only, and you do not have to stay precisely to these
Structures, BUT please try to Structure Your Lyrics to what I like to call >
Music Friendly
Definition
of Music Friendly
Common Song Structures and
Continuity in Lyrical Rhythmic Flow between each of the Verse's > AND
Continuity in Lyrical Rhythmic Flow between each Chorus.
As noted before > Chorus's are most likely
(The Same
Lyrically anyway) , so continuity between them is
usually not a problem. If your Chorus's
ARE
different from "Chorus to Chorus" then I suggest you go back to Square One
and re-write until you have just "One
GREAT Chorus" (that
can be repeated throughout the song) that is >
HEAVY ON THE HOOKLINE.
Song length
IS important
Most Radio Music Programmers will
not add songs to their playlist if they are over 3 ½ minutes long. If
it's a really GREAT song it may get approved for airplay at 4 minutes or
even a bit longer, but that is the exception. My point is make your
lyrics a reasonable length. Two or Three Verses and a Chorus is standard.
Ballads sometimes have an added Bridge, but like I said before I'm not a big
fan of Bridges. I prefer working with lyrics that have 2 or 3 Verses and a
Chorus (That Is Heavy On The HOOKLINE). The Chorus's are
usually repeated after each verse or 2 verses
which of course
accentuate the HOOKLINE. (In the rare instance that your lyrics are
lacking in adequate duration) Don't Fret. It is very easy to
lengthen a song by adding Instrumental Breaks, repeating Lines/Verses
and/or Chorus's.
BUT > It is impossible to shorten
it if your lyrics read more like a Book than a Song. If I were to compose
music to these (book-like) lyrics they would be way too lengthy to be
commercially acceptable. PLEASE keep within the boundaries of acceptable
songwriting practice.
If you are still are a bit confused and in
need of a little coaching on the subject of songwriting I would urge you to
read one or two of the many fine books that have been written on the
subject.
My own AUDIO
and e-book is called
THE
SONGSCULPTOR METHOD,
Secret Songwriter, Tips and Techniques
.
Another one of my favorite books
on the art of songwriting is: "Songsmith" by Jimmy Webb.
Lyrics >
Submit Them Here
Please Note:
You are NOT
required to submit payment until after your lyrics are received and worked
on, and the melody composed to your lyrics have been approved by you.
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